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She wakes to her baby crying
She gets up
Puts on her robe,
And hurries to her
Beautiful future.
She rocks the tender baby to sleep,
Thinking of her only,
Who’s lost in midst of gun-powder
And bloodshed far away.

She sleeps alone on the right side,
Looking to her side empty and cold,
She turns away from his spot,
Closes her eyes for sleep,
But only feels loneliness.
She opens her eyes and sees her love
She sighs, it’s only another illusion

Another dark night gone by
Day passes, no letters for a week
She begins to worry
Her baby rolls around the floor
She’d get down,
But she’s already on the ground
She holds her precious tight
And look out to the sky
How long, she wonders

Her feet are cold
Her eyes a watery
Her arms are tired
Her heart is fainting

She turns again, thinking to face
Another illusion
There’s his handsome face
She closes her eyes and cries
Suddenly his hand is on her cheek
He smiles, a rugged smile
She’s shocked and cries again

His side is no longer lonely,
Their baby is alive and well,
The army wife is smiling.
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I must've been haunted by an army wife to write this 0_0''
It's been on my mind for the past couple of days...Turned out pretty good, don'tcha think? ;p
Well, I hope you all enjoy!
- :heart: SS
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!Undead-Princess-V Feb 28, 2011  Student General Artist
thats exactly how i feel :'(
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~SketchingScarlet Nov 5, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Sorry this response is late! I'm glad you can relate, but I'm sorry you are sad :( Please feel better soon!
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!Undead-Princess-V Nov 9, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks! My husband is all the way in Afganistan and it sucks....
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~SketchingScarlet Nov 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I'm really sorry about that. I'm sure your husband is a brave man to be fighting for our country, but I'm very sorry you have to be left behind. I hope you can look at my poem for some comfort.
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!Undead-Princess-V Nov 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks :hug:
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~unknownangel111388 Jun 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful. You capture this very well... I'm a future Army Wife... and I don't have a child, but the pure feeling that you capture within this poem is amazing... I've felt many of these feelings before and the reuniting feeling you captured well as well.

*Faved*
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Mood: Zest ~SketchingScarlet Jun 2, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Wow!! Thank you very much! I just sorta went with the flow, and it seems I got the message out correctly :3
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and that you connect with it! My goal as a poet is just that: let my audience connect with what I write... So maybe that the person can find comfort within it because they also have the same feeling. ^^
Again, thanks for the fav :hug:
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~unknownangel111388 Jun 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
It was no problem. Finding poems that you can relate to can be often, yet it can also be rare and you did so well with this.
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~thebumblebee01 Apr 12, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol im too stupid to understand....whaddazit meanz?
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~SketchingScarlet Apr 12, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Mm, army wife feeling really lonely and lost without her husband, and one day its not her imagination and he really comes back ^^ I like it personally
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